Monday, 20 May 2019

Hiwi the Kiwi writing

Do you want to know how to be safe on a boat
well keep reading and you will find out ?


First you need to know how to be safe on a boat .
you should always wear a life jacket on a boat.
let me tell you a story about of a man who didn’t
wear a life jacket it's really sad.He was with his
daughter on a boat his daughter was wearing a life
jacket  but he wasn’t he put his life jacket at the other
end of the boat.Bang there boat hit some rock and  the
started to sink .Lucky the daughter was wearing a life
jacket but the dad wasn’t. There was no time to get it
the daughter was wearing  her life jacket and she survived
but the her dad die .that was about being safe on a boat .
When you catch fish you have to measure them if there are
bigger than 30cm then put them back in the water they might
have babies and then we will have more fish for the future if
they are smaller than 30cm put them back  them from the
middle of there start of there nose. Have you ever catched seabird
instead of a fish well we don't want that to happen because we
are losing our sea birds

1 comment:

  1. Hi Shayla,
    I love the way you told a story to let people have a better idea of what could happen. I thought it was cool that you explained properly how to measure them. Maybe next time you could group them into more paragraphs to organise your ideas.
    well done
    -Keeva

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