Hello Shayla! I really like your slide for Mothers day. Its pretty, I love the background and its cool how you have the picture there and the little video. Maybe next time you can choose another font because I couldn't really read the tittle. Other than that you did great! I think you mum LOVES it!
Hi Shayla, I am from Red Hill School. I like the way that you put some detail and you write about Mother's Day. Next time you might like to use captiils for Mother's and Day. The picture is a beautiful place. Thank you for sharing.
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Hello Shayla! I really like your slide for Mothers day. Its pretty, I love the background and its cool how you have the picture there and the little video. Maybe next time you can choose another font because I couldn't really read the tittle. Other than that you did great! I think you mum LOVES it!
ReplyDeletehello Olivet thank you for the feed back next i will make the writing bigger so people can see it.
DeleteHi Shayla, I am from Red Hill School. I like the way that you put some detail and you write about Mother's Day. Next time you might like to use captiils for Mother's and Day. The picture is a beautiful place. Thank you for sharing.
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